2009年6月24日水曜日

Essay 1-02b: University life

I write about university club life. I write my opinion after centence.

This sentence topic is general argument. Many KGU students belong to club. There are many clubs in KGU. There are sports club and cultural club. Every Students chooses which club when they enter KGU. Senior students rush freshman very hard. Many freshman enters to like club. The club is very fun and interesting place. Senior students very kind and funny. They teach many things. For example, about club, school, relationship, class, and need to university life. Freshman are help by them. They are guide of university life. This sentence say general opinion.

This sentence topic is friend’s opinion. My friends enter club. But some friends leave the club. I was very lament. Club is very fun and interesting. They can’t enter the club. My friends that belongs to club are enjoying every day. I think club is place that give us valuable time. My friends says " I like club. Club is very funny. I don't leave club." I glad that I heard this words. This opinion is natural.

This sentence topic is reverse opinion from friend’s opinion. But some friends that leave club says "I can't do thing that I want to do". Certainly, we don't have time to do that I want to do things. Club is very fun. But club cut down time that their valuable. Surely I also don’t have my free time. My life is very busy. Sometimes I think I want to leave the club. But my club members encourage me and they worry me. So I get much power from them. I work hard to practice. Other reason that some friends leaves the club is no money. Club activity cost very high. So they hate pay much money to club. Eventually, they leave the club. This sentence say reverse and my opinion.

This sentence is concluding sentence. Club is very interesting. And it teaches many things to us. I learned many important things form club. For example, I learned relationship, responsibility, and rare experience and time. I think the time that past in the club is not waste time. Club activity is our plus experience. Club is become full time our campus life. If not belongs the club, we are too free to enjoy campus life. I think we got relationship rare relationship. I think we should belong to club.
(399 words)

2 件のコメント:

Yusuke さんのコメント...

Your blog is interesting. I think club will be very precious experience. I also belong to a club and have some good experiences.

hanae さんのコメント...

I could know your university life!
Then, you should write the concluding sentences particularly other sentences.