2009年12月29日火曜日
Tsuruya day
By the way, my boyfriend works there with me. I gave a muffler for him as a Christmas present on December 25. It’s black and chic design. I thought it suit him. He was pleased it so I was very happy. So today I was very happy because when we go home, he wrapped it. It was suit him! I saw him and I was very happy. He ask me suit it himself. I answered yes.
I also work part time job tomorrow. Maybe customers more increase than today. But I will try my best. If you will come near Tsuruya, please come and see me.
(203 words)
2009年12月27日日曜日
Book review

I read Scat, Cats! This story was simple story. Boy and Girl are hero and heroine.
First, many cats come in them house. Cats are very disorderly so two says them scat! But they don’t do. They dash, paw, struggle, and etc. two was very angry. Two say stop to them but they don’t hear it. By the grace of them two’s house was very dirty. When two was very angry, two say go away to them. All cats come out at once. Two’s house gets silence but they feel miss. So they call back all cats. Next, cats ware very good cats. Two and cats spend nice life.
I like animals and also like cats. So I thought cute story, first cats action was very bad. I think I can’t endure them action. But last cats action was very good. I also want to sleep with them.
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Book review

I read the April Fool. This story was one boy’s tall story. April first, he talked one story for his friends on the way to school. He said one day, he met elephant. He rode a little bicycle. Boy’s friends doubted this story. But he said it’s true and talked continuation. The elephant raced with a bus and he put back a flagpole that had fallen down. So five children came and rode on his back. He started with them that on his back. His back is very big and wide. Children ware very enjoys. And he was juggle six bag. He was very excited elephant. Finally, he gave many peanuts to children and him good bye.
A boy’s friends say it is tall story. Therefore he just says April Fool!!
(131 words)
2009年12月16日水曜日
Do you know my Language Learnig Story? (Revised version)
It was a primary school student that I touched English first. I went to cram school then. And I took the English lesson there. The lesson was interesting. I enjoy learning English then. I learned few word and expression of English. When I became junior high school student, there is an English lesson as class. First class is interesting because, first class was game lesson. Probably the teacher thought that it had wanted us to come to like English. By virtue of him I like English. But the content of the class became difficult as the school year went up. So I gradually hate English. I poor remember grammar, so I hate it. And class was for high schools enter examination. It doesn’t interesting at all.
When I was high school student, I hate English yet. But I like speak English by ALT. ALT was very good teacher. I like to speak English with her. And her class was game class. So I enjoy her class. So I also like English. But I couldn’t understand grammar. I study English very hard to understand it. When I three grade students, my homeroom teacher was English teacher. He was very good teacher. He taught me English grammar with easy. I could understand it. I like English again. I thank him now. I’m studying English technical now.
When I entered KGU, I learned not English but Spanish, because I must chose other language. I wanted to learn to French, but I didn’t choose it. First I thought that it is spoken thirdly in the world. So if I can speak French, I can speak people all over the world when I go another country especially I go to African country. But when I read explanation paper, it was written that Spanish was spoken thirdly in the world. So I decided to learn Spanish. Spanish was very interesting language for me. It was easy to read and grammar was very simple. So I like Spanish very much. But I can’t like teacher. He was too serious for me. And he was little character so it difficult to adapt myself to him. I was also scary him. So I didn’t like him.
Future, I want to study English again because, I am interested in translation. I learned grammar when I was freshman but I can’t understand it enough. Translation requests great English power. So I want to study English grammar again. I also want to learn not only Spanish, but also on other language, and I can talk to people all over the world.
I ever study English much time, but I can use it little now. It is difficult to use second language free. So I want to study English more, and I want to make friends all over the world. It is my language learning story. Thank you for reading it.
(558 words)
2009年12月14日月曜日
Night Museum 2
Hero; Rally was a night watchman in Natural History Museum. However, he started a company because my invention sold, and became a president. One day, He went to Natural History Museum, closing the museum there for redecorating. Most exhibits were packed in a case when entering the inside. These were carried to Smithsonian Institute. It was lithography of magic that these revived at night. However, Dexter who was the ape took it to Smithsonian Institute. Therefore, the exhibit of Smithsonian Institute began to move. The Rally became a night watchman again and went to get back the slab in Smithsonian Institute.
He borrowed son's power, and went to the basement storage of Smithsonian Institute. And he found the exhibits about Natural History Museum. But by power of slab, all exhibits revived at night. A Prince of Egyptian aims the slab for world conquest. Rally fights him with his friends of exhibits.
Finally, all things solve. This move has many funny scenes so I like it. I think if you it, you should watch Night Museum before watch it. Please watch this move.
(197 words)
Book review

I read CORDUROY Makes a Cake. It was very cute and fantastic story.
Corduroy is a stuffed of bear that wear the green overalls. He is a Lisa’s stuffed. The day was Lisa’s birthday so the party holds at her house after school. She speaks this thing for corduroy before she goes to school. After she goes to school, he thought makes a birthday cake for Lisa. So he went to the kitchen and started to make a birthday cake. But he dirtied up there. Then he found a box on the corner. A cake was in there. He thought decorated it by pink frosting. So he prepared to decorate it but he wrote many words on the wall to practice. When he wrote many words, he heard someone’s footstep. So he run away there and he hit the door his head. A round box landed on his head. He hid into there. Footstep was Lisa’s mother. She saw the kitchen and said “My goodness!” She started cleaning at once. Meanwhile, he came out under the box. Many buttons was in there. He thought of cake from box’s shape and he thought of make cake to use buttons. He pasted buttons on the box. When it completed, Lisa’s mother came there. He hid in the box. Lisa’s mother found it and she thought it was need for Lisa. So she take is on the table. After school, Lisa and her friend came home and started the Lisa’s birthday party. Her friends present for her. She opened and said thanks. Finally, she found the box. She opened it and she found the Corduroy. She was very surprised and happy. They had a nice birthday party time.
(285 words)
2009年12月3日木曜日
Book review

Heroes are rabbit and hare. They like to eat very much. One day, they found big mushroom. They try to break it in half. But Rabbit couldn’t break it in half. One piece was bigger than the other. Hare insisted that big piece was his. But Rabbit also insisted that same thing. They scramble for big mushroom peace. Just then Mr. Raccoon came and asks them that what is the matter? They said that we can’t this mushroom in half. Mr. Raccoon said that he try it in half. And he took a bite big mushroom peace. But he ate the whole piece. Rabbit and Hare cried that they have only one piece of mushroom. Mr. Raccoon said that he tried other piece in half. But he ate the whole piece again! Rabbit and Hare ware cried again. Mr. Raccoon left very quickly. They didn’t have any way, so they tried to find new food. And they found a big apple. Hare tried to divide it in half. But he can’t divide it in half. And they insisted that big one is his each other. Then Mr. Raccoon appeared again and said have they had a broblem? But they said nothing. They watched him to guard. And they tried the big apple in half themselves.
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Book review

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2009年12月2日水曜日
Essay2-03a: Do you know my language Learning Story?
It was a primary school student that I touched English first. I went to cram school then. And I took the English lesson there. The lesson was interesting. I enjoy learning English then. I learned few word and expression of English. When I became junior high school student, there is an English lesson as class. First class is interesting because, first class was game lesson. Probably the teacher thought that it had wanted us to come to like English. By virtue of him I like English. But the content of the class became difficult as the school year went up. So I gradually hate English. I poor remember grammar. So I hate it. And class was for high schools enter examination. It doesn’t interesting at all. When I was high school student, I hate English yet. But I like speak English by ALT. ALT was very good teacher. I like to speak English with her. And her class was game class. So I enjoy her class. So I also like English. But I couldn’t understand grammar. I study English very hard to understand it. When I 3 grade students, my homeroom teacher was English teacher. He was very good teacher. He taught me English grammar with easy. I could understand it. I like English again. I thank him now. I’m studying English technical. Now
I learned not English but Spanish in KGU. It result that I learned Spanish, because I must chose other language when I entered KGU. I wanted to learn to French. Because I thought that it is spoken thirdly in the world. So if I can speak French, I can speak people all over the world when I go another country especially I go to African country. But when I read explanation paper, it was written that Spanish was spoken thirdly in the world. So I decided to learn Spanish. Spanish was very interesting language for me. It was easy to read and grammar was very simple. So I like Spanish very much. But I can’t like teacher.
My future, I want to learn English again because, I am interested in the translation. I learned grammar when I was fresh man but I can’t understand it enough. The translation needs great English power. So I want to learn English grammar again. And I want to learn not only Spanish but also other language. And I can talk to people all over the world.
I ever learn English much time. But I can use it few now. It is difficult to use free second language. So I want to study English more. And I want to become friend all over the world. It is my language learning story. Thank you read it. (522 words)
2009年11月25日水曜日
Summer Diary
The hero was a night watchman of nature history museum. But he invented many goods and these sold very a lot. So he resigned night watchman and he became a president of his company. He became a rich. But one day, he goes to nature history museum. And it was different after he resigns.
I had a nice time there. I think this movie review. Please read it if you want to find this movie story.
(108 words)
Summer diary
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2009年11月18日水曜日
Summer Dialy
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2009年11月11日水曜日
essay 2-02b
This site has much information about her. There are 8 contents here. These contents shows particular informs about her. This master uses many pictures that her. I was impressive when I watched this site. I didn’t see this site that uses many Hilary’s pictures. My tension became high.
I saw the content, Photo Gallery at first time. It’s URL: http://hilary-pics.com/. There are many her pictures in Gallery. These pictures are very nice because of, Hilary reflected when her spent private time. I don’t watch her private scenery. I glad that I can know her so time.
Next I saw contents, Discography. It’s URL: http://hilarydweb.org/hilary/discography/. This content invited about CD that she released. I think that this content is very convenient because of, people that don’t know about her works. If so people saw this content, they can know about her works.
These contents also invite Hilary’s history or personality. It’s URL: http://hilarydweb.org/hilary/boigraphy/ http://hilarydweb.org/hilary/vital-stats/,
She was born on 1987 September 28. She is from in Houston of Texas, America. She has sister. She flourishes as actress and singer. Her sister is too. She flourished when her 3 years old as actress. And she flourished as singer from in 2002.
She appeared Disney channel’s drama. She appear as girl to this show. I don’t watch this show. This information was invited to contents, Filmography. It’s URL: http://hilarydweb.org/hilary/filmorgaphy/. This content invites movie that her appeared. If people that don’t know her movie, they can know and get her knowledge. So I want to watch this site for many people.
Hilary appears many media, for example: magazine, television, newspaper, radio, and etc. Hilary is very active. So many media deal with her. Content of media invites this information’s. So if you want to know about her active, you can know it by this content.
This fun site has much information about Hilary Duff. I know that this site master likes Hilary Duff. I like this site. This site’s layout is very nice. I think this site master has high sense. This site’s mood is intimate. I finish invite this fun site. This fun site is very nice site. So everyone come on this site!
(423 words)
Speaking homework
Her hobby is video game. She often plays RPG for example, Dragon Quest or Kingdom Hearts. She has only PS2 so she wants to get Wii and PS3.
She wants to try to play the guitar as hobby. She has played it when her high school student. But she stopped it because it is so difficult.
(69 words)
2009年11月10日火曜日
Book review

Henny-Penny is hen. One day, an acorn fell on her head. Then she thought that the sky falling. So she thought tell the king this thing. She runs to tell this thing for the king. On her way she met a cock. He asked her where she is going. She tells to show the king to fall the sky. The cock heard it and he followed her. Next they met duck, goose and turkey. They are followed her. And they met a fox. He asks them where you are going. They ask the sky falling and tell it the king. He heard this story and he said this way is wrong. So he say that he tells good way. They are following him. He takes them for a dark hole. He said it is a good way to go to the king. And he went in the first. Next, turkey went in. Goose, duck, and cock went in there. But Henny-Penny heard cock’s cry. He said run away!! She started to run at once. She run and run until her house. She went home safely. And she never told the king the sky was falling.
My impression is that this story is scary. Fox was very bad fox. Turkey, goose, and duck
ware sorry.
(226 words)
2009年11月7日土曜日
Book review

(116 wards)
2009年10月29日木曜日
Essay2-02a
I like Hilary Duff very much so I searched web site about Hilary Duff. This site has much information about her. There are 9 contents here. And these contents shows particular informs about her. And this master uses many pictures that her. I was impressive when I watched this site. I didn’t see this site that uses many Hilary’s pictures. My tension became high.
I saw the content of gallery at first time. This content has many her pictures. These pictures are very nice. Because of, Hilary reflected when her spent private time. I don’t watch her private scenery. I glad that I can know her so time.
Next I saw contents of release. This content invited about her CD and DVD. I saw this content. I think that this content is very convenient. Because of, people that don’t know about her and her works. If so people saw this content, they can know about her works.
This site also invites Hilary’s history. She was born on 1987 September 28. She is from in Houston of Texas, America. She has sister. She flourishes as actress and singer. Her sister is too. Her flourished when her 3 years old as actress. And she flourished as singer from in 2002. She appeared Disney channel’s drama. She appear as girl to this show. I don’t watch this show. This information was invited to contents of Hilary. This content invites her profile. If people that don’t know her, they can know and get her knowledge. So I want to this site for many people.
Hilary appears many media. For example, magazine, television, newspaper, radio, and etc. she is very active. So many media deal with her. Content of media invite this information’s. So if you want to know about her active, you can know it by this content.
This fun site has much information about Hilary Duff. I know that this site master likes Hilary Duff. I like this site. This site’s layout is very nice. I think this site master has high sense. This site’s mood is intimate.
I finish invite this fun site. This fun site is very nice site. So everyone come on this site!
(381 words)
Essay2-02a
This site invite about Hilary Duff. She is American actress and singer. It use many pictures that her. And it invites her CD and DVD. And there is contact form here. So we can contact for this master.
(68 words)
Summer Diary
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2009年10月23日金曜日
Summer's memory
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Summer's memory
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2009年10月21日水曜日
Essays2-01a-b Favorite Place
One of my favorite places is my room at home. My room is very composing place. I often relax main my room. There are personal computer, video game, desk, television, and sofa bed. So my room is very convenient. I like stay on the sofa bed. My sofa bed is very comfortable, because I can take the books, comics, and portable game. My sofa bed is convenient.
Next my favorite place is mandolin club’s room. There is clubroom 5 flowed at the 8 pavilion. I use stair when go to my clubroom every day. I’m very tired every day. Another club member comes to there. I can talk many club members. And I can practice the mandocello. I like to speak club member and play the mandocello at there.
I like library very much, because of, I like reading. But I don’t buy the books. Books are expensive for me. Library is lent many books for free. So I can read many books. I often go to municipal library and KGU library. I went to municipal library cense I was child with my father. I lent many books then. Library is very nice place for me.
Movie Theater is also my favorite place. I often go to “Guranparetta” near the Daiei Inc with my friends or alone. I like to watch the movie. Of course, to watch the movie by DVD is good. But I like watching the movie in Movie Theater. Because of, to watch the movie in the movie theater is more exciting than watching by DVD. So I like Movie Theater.
I like shopping very much. So I often go to shopping mall. I like to go to the shopping mall. Shopping mall; Youme Town and Curea are my favorite places. I often go there by bicycle. There are many shops in there. So I like there. I buy clothes and goods there. But these are very far from my house so I can’t go there many times. I’m very excited when I go there.
These are my favorite places. Thank you read my essay. These places are very nice places. Please go there. I often stay there. So if you go there, you see me. My favorite places essay is finish.
(408 words)
2009年10月20日火曜日
Book review

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2009年10月18日日曜日
Speaking homework
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Homework of speaking
I like fishes but I don’t like snakes. I hate snakes!! Snake is very eeriness. I can’t touch its skin. It is very yucky. And it has poison. If we are bited it, I will die. I’m scary it. So I don’t like snakes.
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2009年10月14日水曜日
Favorite place
One of my favorite places is my room at my house. My room is very compose place. I often relax main my room. There are personal computer, video game, desk, television, and sofa bed. I like stay on the sofa bed. My sofa bed is very comfortable. And I can catch the books, comics, and portable game. My sofa bed is convenient.
Next my favorite place is club room. I belong to the mandolin club. There is club room 5 flowed in the NO.8 tower. We every time use stair when go to my club room. I am very tired every time. Another club member comes to there. I can talk many club members. And I can practice the mandocell. I like to speak club member and play the mandocello. Club room is little dirty. But like club room.
I like library very much. I like to read the books. But I don’t buy my book.
Because of, books is expenceve for me. Library is rent many books for me free. So I can read many books. I went there cense I was child. Library is very nice place for me.
Movie theater is also my favorite place. I like to watch the movie. I often go movie theater near the KGU with my friends or alone. Of course, to watch the movie by DVD is good. But I like watch the movie in movie theater. Because of, to watch the movie in the movie theater is more exciting than watch by DVD. So I like movie theater.
I like shopping very much. So I often go to shopping mall. I like to go to the shopping mall. Shopping mall is my favorite place. I often go to the “youme town” and “Curea” by bicycle. I buy clothes and goods there. But shopping malls are very far from my house so I can’t go there many time. Therefore, I like there. There are many shops there. I am very excited when I go there.
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2009年10月7日水曜日
Out line
―My room
―Library
●Dark place
―Movie theater
●Busy place
―Tsuruya
―Amusement park
―Shopping mall
―Club room
―Student union
●Restaurant
―Pom no ki
―Pet shop
●Cool place
●Warm place
●Compose place
―Book store
―My room
―Corner
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Brainstorm
Club room
My room
Student union
Book store
Library
Pom no ki
Quiet place
Dark place
Movie theater
Amusement park
Busy place
Corner
Cool place
Warm place
Shopping mall
Pet shop
Restaurant
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BR 2-01:The Snow Child
Old man and woman lived at the small house. They love each other. But they don't happy because they wanted a child. They don't have child. One day, they made a girl from snow. Old woman kissed her and she moved. She always slept at outside on the bed of snow. And she played with children next door. Spring, everyone feel happy but she doesn't feel happy. Because of, she is snow child. She must stay cold place. So she went to cold place during spring for fall. Old couple was very sad. But next winter, snow child came back!
Reference
Ziefert, H. (2000). The Snow Child. America: PUFFIN.
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Book review
Old man and woman lived at the small house. They love each other. But they don't happy because they wanted a child. They don't have child. One day, they made a girl from snow. Old woman kissed her and she moved. She always slept at outside on the bed of snow. And she played with children next door. Spring, everyone feel happy but she doesn't feel happy. Because of, she is snow child. She must stay cold place. So she went to cold place during spring for fall. Old couple was very sad. But next winter, snow child came back!
(105 words)
2009年10月5日月曜日
Summer Diary
(57 words)
2009年9月8日火曜日
memory 1, August
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2009年7月18日土曜日
The Princess and the Pea

The big storm day, one princess had comes the castle. The king and queen said come in. The princess was very drippy. But she said herself is real princess. Then queen said her that if her real princess, she find it. And she went to bed room.
The queen put a little pea on the bed. And she ordered her followers that twenty ten mattresses on the pea and put twenty down cover on the mattresses. And she called the princess. The princess slept on it.
Next morning, the king, queen and prince asked her how you slept yesterday. She answers no. Because, she felt there is a big lump in her bed. So she couldn’t sleep enough. The king and queen heard this answer and they smiled. They admit she real princess. Prince married her because he found her real princess.
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Cat Game

Next they started the tag. Pat chases after Matt. Matt also chases after Pat. Then the dog chases after them. They run away on the tree. The dog looks up from under the tree. They look down from on the tree. They understood that the dog wants to play with them. So they downed from tree. And they play together.
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2009年7月13日月曜日
Essay 1-03b: Lilo & stitch
Lilo is little girl. She lives with her sister. Her parents pass away by car accident. Her sister is her curator. But a man that Welfare Management Bureau comes her and Lilo protect from her. But she stops it from him. He also doesn’t want to protect Lilo form her. He watches them every day. I thought he was very stern. If Lilo was adopted his group, she feel down every day. So I want to boost her sister.
Lilo’s sister has a boyfriend. He helps her and Lilo. He takes care of Lilo. One day, he played the surfing near the sea. Lilo, Her sister, and stitch play it together. He takes on the big wave with Lilo and stitch. I think he is very kind. I know why he very kind for Lilo and her sister. But her sister oblivious him, so I sympathized him.
Lilo didn’t have friends. So her sister thinks that gives dog to her as friend. Then Lilo chose stitch as friend. Her sister opposes it. But eventually Lilo chose stitch. Like this stitch became them family. But he didn’t think became them family. He thinks them shield from enemy from Milky Way union. Stitch struggle very much. This blame Lilo and her sister’s life ware brake. So Lilo was taken for a man Welfare Management Bureau. Lilo gets angry. Stitch goes out house. Stitch is very cute! I also want to have him as pet and friend. I was envy Lilo.
Finally, Lilo was kidnap from alien. And stitch helps her. But other alien hold stitch. But stitch became very clever. So this alien appoint Lilo and her sister stitch’s curator. Lilo passes happy life with them. I like this scene. Their life was very fun. I want to pass life as their life. I want to go to Hawaii someday.
The surprised thing is a man that Welfare Management Bureau is hero of MIB. It was very surprise.
This movie was taught that important of family tie. I hope to watch this movie with family. If family watch this movie, family think importance of tie. I want to watch this story with my family.
(455 words)
The sorcerer's apprentice

After magician go shopping, Max lay on the sofa. He didn’t be full up the water tank. And he think of take the magic for a broom and he make to pump water. He took the magic for the broom and it succeeded. The broom started to pump the water. Max fell asleep after then.
When he woke up, the room was full by water. He ordered for broom that it stop to pump the water. But the broom doesn’t stop it. Because there is no other way, he cut down the broom for half. But both broom that cut down by Max start to move and those kept to pump water. Water collect full of room. Max puzzled very much.
Then the Max’s master came back. He was very surprised at this condition. But he sung the magic spell. And water drew from the room. The broom also returned. Max’s master was angry. But he thought he teach how to right magic.
Some year later, Max grew up the great magician. But he little feared the broom.
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2009年7月9日木曜日
Billy Goats Gruff

One winter, the farm where they live, doesn’t have enough them food. So they are very hungry. So Biffer proposed to go opposite mountain. There are enough them food there. But they must cross the bridge to go there. The troll lives there. Beanie and Bertie frighten and they said that can’t cross the bridge. Biffer encouraged them. And they decided to go there.
First time, they saw the map. And they practice the climb up hills. Finally, they prepare to go there. And they say goodbye another animals. Like this they started for opposite mountain.
They advance in the dark forest. Beanie frightened but Biffer soothed. After pass the forest, Beanie cross the bridge that lives the troll alone. When he reached the middle of the bridge, the troll appeared his front. The troll says to eat him. But he said that he is small, if troll set him free, next goat comes bigger than him. The troll set him free. He crosses the bridge quickly.
Next goat Bertie come this bridge. When he also reached the middle of the bridge, the troll appeared his front. But he says same thing with Beanie too. And he also crosses the bridge quickly.
The last goat Bertie come this bridge. The troll attack Bertie. But he defeat with his big and strong horn. The troll fell from the bridge and sank under the water.
They could go opposite mountain safely. And they eat many foods full.
(303 words)
2009年7月8日水曜日
Portfolio for Writing Ⅲ
Student ID: 08156
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | Hello my host family | 09, 4, 19 | 6 | 291 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | Letter to host family | 09, 5, 20 | 6 | 283 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | Essay 1-02a: University life | 09, 6, 3 | 5 | 351 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | Essay 1-02b: University life | 09, 6, 24 | 5 | 399 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Essay 1-03a: Lilo & Stitch | 09, 6, 29 | 8 | 330 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | Essay 1-03b: Lilo & Stitch | 09.07.13 | 7 | 455 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Totals | --- | --- | 37 | 2109 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | 2009.07.01 | 25 | ||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | 2009.07.01 | 23 | ||
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | ||||
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
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2.6. Additional reflections on comments
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | Arthur Lost in the Museum | 2009.04.21 | 114 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | The Teeny-Tiny Woman | 2009.04.22 | 88 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | snowman story | 2009.04.30 | 192 | 0 |
BR 1-04 | Ghost of Chillmore Castle | 2009.06.01 | 237 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | snowman story 2 | 2009.06.01 | 277 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | Hansel & Gretel | 2009.06.15 | 321 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | Jack and the Beanstalk | 2009.06.15 | 253 | 1 |
BR 1-08 | Rumpelstiltskin | 2009.07.06 | 566 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | Billy Goats Gurff | 2009.07.09 | 303 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | The sorcerer's apprentice | 2009.07.13 | 241 | 0 |
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BR 1-12 | The princess and the Pea | 2009.07.18 | 180 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
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6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
2009年7月6日月曜日
Rumpelstiltskin

He has a pretty daughter. Her name is Anna. One day, the King came to her village. And he found her and asked the name to her. Then her father came there and he said lie that she can spin the straw and this straw become the gold. First time, the King doesn’t believe but finally, he believes it. He asked him to take his daughter to his castle for make sure this story was truth. She thought get chance that becomes Queen.
Next morning, she and her father went to the castle. The castle was very old. The King waited front of gate. And he said follow him to her. He took the room where full straw and spinning-wheel. He said her to spin it and change it the gold. If she can’t it, she was killed. He locked her there.
Anna sat down and lost. Because of, she can’t spin the straw and change the gold. That story was lie by her father. Then somebody’s voice heard from the window. She came near the window. A little old man who was riding on a wooden spoon floated in the sky there. He asked her to come into the room. She opened the window and let him into there. Little old man bowed and offered to spin the straw and change it the gold if she gives him someone. She gave her necklace to him. He started to spin the straw and change it the gold. She was very surprised by this view. First, she watched how to it. But her eyes began to close and she fell asleep.
When she woke up next morning, little old man had gone. But there are many reels with golden thread there. The King watched this room and he was very surprised. And he took the next room. There is straw more than first room. That night, same man came again. She gave her ring to him. He started spin the straw and change it the gold again. Next morning, straw changed reel with golden thread again. She and the King pleased each other. And he took next room again. Next room’s straw was the best of all room. The King said if she can change the straw for gold, he will marry her. That night same mane came there too. But she didn’t have thing to give him. The man said to want to first boy who she will bear someday. She reluctant this proposal but finally she promised him. Next morning, all straw changed reel with golden thread too. The King pleased and he proposed her.
A year late, she bore a pretty boy. She loves him. One day, the little old man came to get her baby. She was reluctant to keep this promise. But he was very angry. He returns once but he came again too. He gave three days. If she can’t answer his truth name, he takes her baby, he said. She can’t his name by two days. But the King his truth name casually. The little old man’s truth name is “Rumpelstiltskin”. She answered it when came to see her. He was very surprise and angry. He jumped and shot through the room’s wall. And he returned riding his wooden spoon. He was never come again.
2009年7月4日土曜日
42th Music Festival

2009年7月3日金曜日
Birthday party

My Birthday party was held on 29th June. Why party didn’t hold on my birthday? Because, I practiced mandroncello this day. So my birthday party was held on this day. I came back home by bus earlier than every day. When I arrived home, many banquet waited me. For example, hand made pizza, fly fishes, and big fruits cake. This was very delicious. And I became 20 years old so my parents bought a red wine and kahlua for me as birthday present. I like kahlua very much. I drank it then. I ate dinner by full. And I got drunk little. I became sleepy so I went to bed in my room after dinner. And I too full to eat cake until last. But I was glad to celebrate from my family.
(133 words)
Birthday of 20
(204 words)
2009年7月1日水曜日
Vacation plans
(107 words)
About blogging
(94 words)
About my keitai
(94 words)
Using the computer
(93 words)
My favorite movie
(93 words)
2009年6月29日月曜日
Essay 1-03a: Lilo & Stitch
Lilo is little girl. She lives with her sister. Her parents pass away by car accident. Her sister is her curator. But a man that Welfare Management Bureau comes her and Lilo protect from her. But she stops it from him. He also doesn’t want to protect Lilo form her. He watches them every day.
Lilo’s sister has a boyfriend. He helps her and Lilo. He takes care of Lilo. One day, he played the surfing near the sea. Lilo, Her sister, and stitch play it together. He takes on the big wave with Lilo and stitch.
Lilo didn’t have friends. So her sister thinks that gives dog to her as friend. Then Lilo chose stitch as friend. Her sister opposes it. But eventually Lilo chose stitch. Like this stitch became them family. But he didn’t think became them family. He thinks them shield from enemy from Milky Way union.
Stitch struggle very much. This blame Lilo and her sister’s life ware brake. So Lilo was taken for a man Welfare Management Bureau. Lilo gets angry. Stitch goes out house.
Finally, Lilo was kidnap from alien. And stitch helps her. But other alien hold stitch. But stitch became very clever. So this alien appoint Lilo and her sister stitch’s curator. Lilo passes happy life with them.
The surprised thing is a man that Welfare Management Bureau is hero of MIB. It was very surprise.
This movie was taught that important of family tie. I hope to watch this movie with family.
(330 words)
2009年6月24日水曜日
Essay 1-02b: University life
This sentence topic is general argument. Many KGU students belong to club. There are many clubs in KGU. There are sports club and cultural club. Every Students chooses which club when they enter KGU. Senior students rush freshman very hard. Many freshman enters to like club. The club is very fun and interesting place. Senior students very kind and funny. They teach many things. For example, about club, school, relationship, class, and need to university life. Freshman are help by them. They are guide of university life. This sentence say general opinion.
This sentence topic is friend’s opinion. My friends enter club. But some friends leave the club. I was very lament. Club is very fun and interesting. They can’t enter the club. My friends that belongs to club are enjoying every day. I think club is place that give us valuable time. My friends says " I like club. Club is very funny. I don't leave club." I glad that I heard this words. This opinion is natural.
This sentence topic is reverse opinion from friend’s opinion. But some friends that leave club says "I can't do thing that I want to do". Certainly, we don't have time to do that I want to do things. Club is very fun. But club cut down time that their valuable. Surely I also don’t have my free time. My life is very busy. Sometimes I think I want to leave the club. But my club members encourage me and they worry me. So I get much power from them. I work hard to practice. Other reason that some friends leaves the club is no money. Club activity cost very high. So they hate pay much money to club. Eventually, they leave the club. This sentence say reverse and my opinion.
This sentence is concluding sentence. Club is very interesting. And it teaches many things to us. I learned many important things form club. For example, I learned relationship, responsibility, and rare experience and time. I think the time that past in the club is not waste time. Club activity is our plus experience. Club is become full time our campus life. If not belongs the club, we are too free to enjoy campus life. I think we got relationship rare relationship. I think we should belong to club.
(399 words)
2009年6月23日火曜日
Music Festival
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2009年6月19日金曜日
Foreign country
(96 words)
My other classes
(82 words)
My way to study English
(71 words)
Food
(75 words)
My Golden week plan
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My favorite hobby
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Music
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My first class
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My spring vacation
We played there to use ball, frisbee or sleigh. We had a nice time. And I went to SOYOKAZE park with my club member on March 16 and 17.
We stay there one night. I got very good memories then. I enjoyed my spring vacation.
(69 words)
2009年6月17日水曜日
I think theme from Lilo&Stitch
-General friend relationship is strong.
-Friends is kind
-Friends lend friend's things
-Friends help anytime
-Sometime fight and quarrel
+Family relationship
-Family help anytime
-Family gives love
-Family is together anytime
-If family don’t be together, don’t forget
-When family died
(57 words)
2009年6月16日火曜日
movie

The movie is very exciting story. I had read this story by book when I junior high school student. This book was written by Mr. Dan Brown. I like his story. This story is very interesting and exciting story. I think “The angels and devils” is more interesting than “Da Vinci code”. I’m happy that this story becomes the movie.
This story little changes from book. I feel little sad to change the story. But this story was interesting. So I don’t feel uselessness the time. I enjoyed this movie.
After movie, we went to down town by bicycle. And I bought a comic and speaker. The speaker is very cute. It’s my favorite goods. We ate the ice candy and daunts. It was delicious.
Next, we went to my club room at the KGU. We think watch the DVD at the club room. But my senior student practice the Mandolin. So we take the PC to student’s house. And we watch the horror movies with ate many sweets. I had nice days.
(228 words)
2009年6月15日月曜日
Jack and the Beanstalk
He goes to market to sell the cow. He met an old man on the way to market. He said the cow is a fine cow. And he also says wants to exchange it. And he took five dried beans. He said it magic beans. Jack exchanged it to the cow.
His mother got angry to hear this story. Jack buried these beans into the garden and go to bed. Next day, there is a giant bean tree on the garden. Jack was very surprised. And he tried to climb it. Finery, he arrived big castle on the cloud. It is giant cannibal ogre’s house.
Jack is into the castle. And he met giant cannibal ogre’s wife. She is kind to him. Then her husband came back. Jack hid and stole his fowl that lay golden eggs. A giant dog chases him. But he safe.
His mother saw this fowl and pleases. Their life became rich by golden eggs. But Jack tries to climb the giant bean tree again. And he stole golden harp. This time giant cannibal ogre chases him. He runs away from him for dear life. He came back and he and his mother cut down the tree. So giant cannibal ogre died. Eventually, he gets two treasures.
(253 words)
Book review
Midnight, Hansel and Gretel go home follow stone. It was light by moonlight. They arrived them house.
Next day stepmother will take them deep into the forest. Hansel thinks pick up the stones again. But the door rocked so he couldn’t pick up the stones. He has to drop the crumb. But it was eaten from birds. So they ware lost in the forest.
They walked in the forest. At noon, they found the sweets house. They are hungry so they eating it. Then, a witch went out from the house. And she invited them into the house. The witch served up many sweets. They ate them full. But it was trap. Hansel was caught from her and shut little hut. Gretel was cooked his meal. A witch thinks that will eat his when he become fat.
One day, the witch say to Gretel get inside the oven and check how warm. But she refused. And she ask to witch check herself. The witch gets into the oven. Gretel shut down the oven’s door and cooked her.
Gretel helps Hansel as soon as. And they found many jewels. They went home with jewels. At home, woodcutter was overjoyed to see them. Stepmother wasn’t there. So they are happy. After, they lived with happy.
(321 words)
Lilo & Stitch
Lilo is little girl. She lives with her sister. Her parents pass away by car accident. Her sister is her curator. But a man that Welfare Management Bureau comes her and Lilo protect from her. But she stop it form him. He also doesn’t want to protect Lilo form her. He watches them everyday.
Lilo didn’t have friends. So her sister thinks that gives dog to her as friend. Then Lilo chose stitch as friend. Her sister opposes it. But eventually Lilo chose stitch. Like this stitch became them family. But he didn’t think became them family. He thinks them shield from enemy from Milky Way union.
Stitch struggle very much. This blame Lilo and her sister’s life ware brake. So Lilo was taken for a man Welfare Management Bureau. Lilo gets angry. Stitch goes out house.
Finally, Lilo was kidnap from alien. And stitch helps her. But other alien hold stitch. But stitch became very clever. So this alien appoint Lilo and her sister stitch’s curator. Lilo passes happy life with them.
The surprised thing is a man that Welfare Management Bureau is hero of MIB. It was very surprise.
This movie was taught that important of family tie. I hope to watch this movie with family.
(287 words)
2009年6月4日木曜日
New student welcome party
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2009年6月3日水曜日
Essay 1-02a: University life
Many KGU students belong to club. There are many clubs in KGU. There are sports club and cultural club. Every Students chooses which club when they enter KGU. Senior students rush freshman very hard. Many freshman enters to like club. The club is very fun and interesting place. Senior students very kind and funny. They teach many things. For example, about club, school, relationship, class, and need to university life. Freshman are help by them. They are guide of university life.
My friends enter club. But some friends leave the club. I was very lament. Club is very fun and interesting. They can’t enter the club. My friends that belongs to club are enjoying every day. I think club is place that give us valuable time. My friends says " I like club. Club is very funny. I don't leave club." I glad that I heard this words.
But some friends that leave club says "I can't do thing that I want to do". Certainly, we don't have time to do that I want to do things. Club is very fun. But club cut down time that thire valable. Surely I also don’t have my free time. My life is very busy. Sometimes I think I want to leave the club. But my club members encourage me and they worry me. So I get much power from them. I work hard to practice. Other reason that some friends leaves the club is no money. Club activity cost very high. So they hate pay much money to club. Eventually, they leave the club.
Club is very interesting. And it teaches many things to us. I learned many important things form club. For example, I learned relationship, responsibility, and rare experience and time. I think the time that past in the club is not waste time. Club activity is our plus experience. Club is become full time our campus life. If not belongs the club, we are too free to enjoy campus life. I think we got relationship rare relationship. I think we should belong to club.
(351 words)