2009年6月4日木曜日

New student welcome party

Today, my club: Mandolin club hold new student welcome party. It was very fun. First, we went to meeting of culture club. I saw much performance by club reader. After this meeting, we went to the hotel Kogane by bus. We set up the party. The party was very hard and fun. I take care of customers. The party finished after 2 hours. I came back to KGU on foot. I was tired. And I went to my club member’s house for second party. I drank the plum Saki. It was very delicious. I enjoy today.
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mangi madang さんのコメント...

Hello Akiha.

You look to have good communication with not only with your club member but also with another club's students. I think it is very good thing. Keep good communication, you can enjoy and keep good relationship with people.

Toshi

2009年6月8日 23:46
Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hi Akiha,

Why have you labeled this post (and so many others) "essays"? This isn't one of the major assignments for Writing III, §1A, is it?

Please reserve the label "essays" for completed major assignments, original and revised, and remind your classmates and peers, too. At this juncture, the label "essays" should suit about four posts, each five or more ¶¶ in length, rather than 19 posts, some of them quite short like this one.

Cheers, PB

2009年6月12日 11:17

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